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elsewhere

July 30, 2008

I never seek for it, yet it came upon me
like the proud sun, beaming across the earth
with its warmth soaked in euphemisms
disguising itself with its radiance,
blinding all eyes – seeing that everything’s
about radiance and beautiful weekend mornings.

tell me, shall I just wait for the day to end,
though aware, I am, that there’ll be no dusk?
or I should just run, sought the refuge
of shadows and its damp chill, awaiting
for me, once I give up my first quest
to find THE reasons …elsewhere?

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18 comments

  1. be bold and be brave
    whatever it might be
    only you can decipher,
    responds to thy query

    good-luck my friend
    god bless all the same
    that reasons you have,
    is neither here nor there


  2. good luck!

    basta si _h___n_k_
    ang reason kung bakit ako binabangungot baka sya rin yung hinahanap mo.. hehe

    good luck ulet!


  3. to seek solace in solitude is to run away. face everything head-on, so in the end you will never have to ask yourself, “what if”?

    could’ve beens and would’ve beens, yan ang pinakamatinding kalaban ng taong gumawa ng desisyon na nakapikit.


  4. shet!! ito ang nakaka nosebleed wait lng kuha ko ng panyo puro dugo na keyboard ko eh…

    mahahanap mo din yun sher..elsewer…kaw pa eh magaling ka eh…ul find it for sure…:)


  5. omigosh! *nosebleed

    kahit 2 stanzas lang eh dinugo na nang todo ilong ko. hehe. nice LV! lethal talaga mga verses. hehe


  6. kahit tumakbo, hindi maiiwasan ang liwanag na dulot ng araw.

    mamili

    magtago at ikubli ang sarili sa init na dulot nito

    o

    antaying matapos ang gabi, at hayaan ang sarili na masaksihan ang panibagong araw?


  7. taena akala ko bugtong.

    ni regla naman ako dito. hahaha.


  8. o huwaw. nosebleed ako sa poem mo.

    oi nasa blogroll na kita sher!


  9. shyet epistaxis ito.

    ipipikit ko lang ang aking mata baka sakaling maliwanagan ako. πŸ˜€


  10. *hugs* kasi wala akong masabe πŸ˜›


  11. dont wait… why wait?

    initiate and make an effort.

    u r deep.

    buti na lang may valium ako d2.

    lol.


  12. wala akong masabi…
    halika nga, hug na lang kita!

    kaya mo yan friend. sabi nga ng isang kanta…

    be brave, little one
    make a wish for each sad little tear
    hold your head up, though no one is near
    someone’s waiting for you…

    oo, alam ko, you’re not “little one” anymore… pero basta, maganda ung mensahe ng kanta… πŸ˜‰


  13. ang lalim man..as ive known your poems way back ago,may mga poems ka na sinadya mong balutan ng talinhaga no…


  14. Malalim nga pero naintindihan ko.
    Sayang naman ganda ng tula kung hindi ko maiintindihan.

    Tungkol saan nga ito?


  15. @jimg : lupit, mas malupit pa ang comment mo sa tula ko… salamat idolong jim!

    @fb : haha isusumbong kita kay _h___n_k_!!!

    @utakmunggo : ang lalim mo talaga madam! kamusta naman ang haircut mo? πŸ˜€

    @emoterang nurse : salamat sa pagdaan… mahahanap ko ba? hmmm


  16. @beero : ako din, nagnose bleed ng sinulat ko yan… hehe..

    @kdr : lupit, isang henyo ka talaga, RB!!

    @leyn : hmmm at kailangan magkasunod sila ng comment ni kdr? ooooy lab is in da eyr!

    @popoy : OOOY! si Popoy!!! haha salamat din sa pagdaan parekoy…


  17. @mahiwagang sibuyas : epistaxis – ngeks dito ako nosebleed… uri ba ito ng taxi?

    @ayz : ayos a, pordaperstaym, walang nasabi si ayz? hehe joke lang ayz… mwah!

    @kasper : napadaan din ako sa blog mo, mas malupit ang blog mo parekoy..

    @shayleigh : little big one na lang, pwede na?


  18. @mishell : nahihiwagaan na ko sayo kung sino ka, pakilala ka na kasi… writer ka din ba ng BCC?



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